link: http://alohaakari88.wix.com/showcase-portfolio
Questions:
Q: What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why?
Q: Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me?
Q: Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?
Questions:
Q: What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why?
A: I liked querencia the best because, its about my hometown.
Q: What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?
A: The CNN one I didn't really hear the voice part of it and is something you should work hard on.
Q: Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me?
A: Word choice because, the words you use really make the essay good.
Q: Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?
A: Voice because, this is an important part and I didn't really hear your voice.
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