The first one meets the requirements and, the second one is just the one that I preferred because, of the simplicity if you were wondering why I had two.
I love the idea of your graphic card. Though I feel that you could have done a lot more to this card. The poem is great, but it's kind of hard to tell that you actually put your poem in the background. Maybe instead of the poem, you could have put words that described you that related to the poem. Also maybe you could have put more work into the picture of yourself to. It just looks like you put a black and white filter on. Overall it was a great poem and your graphic card is nice, but I fell that you could have done more to your graphic card because it feels slightly too simple.
The graphic is great, it's a unique design, but I feel like you could've work a bit more on it. For example, the background is made of words, but it's a bit difficult to read with your poem covering most of it. Also I understand your background to be themed with black and white, but maybe you could've worked on it a bit more to put more, feeling to it. Otherwise it looks great!
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I love the idea of your graphic card. Though I feel that you could have done a lot more to this card. The poem is great, but it's kind of hard to tell that you actually put your poem in the background. Maybe instead of the poem, you could have put words that described you that related to the poem. Also maybe you could have put more work into the picture of yourself to. It just looks like you put a black and white filter on. Overall it was a great poem and your graphic card is nice, but I fell that you could have done more to your graphic card because it feels slightly too simple.
ReplyDeleteThe graphic is great, it's a unique design, but I feel like you could've work a bit more on it. For example, the background is made of words, but it's a bit difficult to read with your poem covering most of it. Also I understand your background to be themed with black and white, but maybe you could've worked on it a bit more to put more, feeling to it. Otherwise it looks great!
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