Assignment 15: A poem about me

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constantly overlooked for something better


tossed around because of my ubiquity


whose value is always undermined by the others


and, so my capabilities are ignored


but, i still linger waiting for someone,


something to realize my worth.





and, it is then in times of need


that i’ll be recognized and so,


I'll appear at the tip of the tongue


ready to be released and assist you


slurs of emotions that are attached to me


are released into shouts and whispers






my power of feeling is unsealed, my two best emotions.


anger that seethes through the sentences


from injustice that touches, you and I


care, for when loved ones are in despair


and my steady flow of reassurance


will bring you back up





and, although i will always linger with you


at the tip of the tongue i rest


until, the need for me is met


and, i’ll flow whenever


for i am constant, and will never fade

because, i am the words that’ll stick with you

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2 comments

  1. I really love your poem, how you used big vocabulary words. It draws the reader in right away. However I don't think you need as much empathizes. It's good to have a few words bolded or italized, but it looks like there are a few bded words in each stanzas. However I really do love your poem, it's kind of giving the reader wondering what you are comparing yourself to and you conclude really well. Great job!

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  2. You done well not saying that you connect to the word, word with well chosen vocabulary I was not expecting. But why do you need to make them bold for? It's kinda unnecessary, also remember to capitalize your words. I can see how you can connect the words to yourself with various vocabulary to you poem.

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