Assignment 15: A poem about me
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constantly overlooked for something better
tossed around because of my ubiquity
whose value is always undermined by the others
and, so my capabilities are ignored
but, i still linger waiting for someone,
something to realize my worth.
and, it is then in times of need
that i’ll be recognized and so,
I'll appear at the tip of the tongue
ready to be released and assist you
slurs of emotions that are attached to me
are released into shouts and whispers
my power of feeling is unsealed, my two best emotions.
anger that seethes through the sentences
from injustice that touches, you and I
care, for when loved ones are in despair
and my steady flow of reassurance
will bring you back up
and, although i will always linger with you
at the tip of the tongue i rest
until, the need for me is met
and, i’ll flow whenever
for i am constant, and will never fade
because, i am the words that’ll stick with you
2 comments
I really love your poem, how you used big vocabulary words. It draws the reader in right away. However I don't think you need as much empathizes. It's good to have a few words bolded or italized, but it looks like there are a few bded words in each stanzas. However I really do love your poem, it's kind of giving the reader wondering what you are comparing yourself to and you conclude really well. Great job!
ReplyDeleteYou done well not saying that you connect to the word, word with well chosen vocabulary I was not expecting. But why do you need to make them bold for? It's kinda unnecessary, also remember to capitalize your words. I can see how you can connect the words to yourself with various vocabulary to you poem.
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